EGGY

Simple and temporary

I wrote this yesterday. Another simple one but I think it has potential. Feel free to respond. This is still kind of a rough copy

This is my first song...I just want to see the response and decide whether to continue working on it. P.S. Turn it up...and this was recorded with only on mic and is a fairly rough version.

Is it too simplistic?

The lyrics

Floating along on the breeze
Going where I please
The way ahead is clear
All I gotta do is steer.

No one else to guide me home
You have to make the trip alone
Over hills and down the way
Don’t know if I’ll make it today

Going home again…home again

I’ve been away far too long
So I’ll say hi in a song
I know I’ll be warm
Home in mother’s arms

Home’s where I go
When I want to feel whole

Play my favorite song
I Feel like I belong
No one else can take away
How I feel when I stay

Home’s where I go…When I just don’t know

Home’s where I go…